Day two of our children’s writing workshop

Day two of our writing workshop group and what an amazing two days it’s been.  We’ve managed to get through two pretty intense sessions each day. And let me tell you, there’s nothing like an experienced group of writers to give you honest and useful feedback.  Egos have to be left at the door.  It’s all about figuring out what is working about each piece, and what isn’t. The combined experience of this wonderful group of women is extensive, easily surpassing a hundred books. Criticism is thoughtful, specific, and measured. Every one of us is ready to listen to the feedback of colleagues. Being able to accept criticism is not always easy, but when you understand how helpful constructive criticism can be, it really isn’t that difficult. Of course an essential ingredient to this all working is trust.  We all trust each other to have the best interest of the story at heart.

These past few days have been a real treasure.  We have another full day of work ahead of us, but I don’t think I’m the only one who relishes that.  One more day of working together, and then we’ll each be back in our own solitary worlds, building stories that we hope will find their way into the lives of children and teenagers.  Some of the stories we are workshopping will soon sit on the shelves of a bookstore.  Some of our stories will need a bit more tweaking and others will be revised beyond recognition.  Some may be put on a shelf to be revisited in the future. No matter.  Each will be one step closer to being better.  That’s what writing is all about…

Another lovely part of these past few days has been just being on the Gulf Islands to enjoy the slower pace, drink in the cultural and artistic richness and soak up the rural charm. A little more sunshine would be welcome, but hey, you can’t have everything…

 

 

Kristin Butcher’s great point of view post

I’ve been workshopping some writing pieces with a few writer friends on Saltspring Island.  Point of view is something that keeps coming up, even though we are all writers with many books to our credit.  Another writer friend, Kristin Butcher has an excellant post on point of view that is well worth checking out.

Rejection

If you have plans to be a writer, you’d better get used to the idea of rejection…

This is what I plan to send the next time I get rejected.

Well, maybe not, but it cheers me up to think that I could!

Can’t be at BEA

It’s confession time.  I can’t write a damed thing.  I’m just too absorbed with BEA (the annual Book Expo America for those of you who are book people). I’m such a groupie.  I love hearing about the various goings on…the panels, the characters, the free books, and even the entertainment.  For example, did you know of Libba Bray’s other talent outside of writing incredibly funny yet poignant books for young adults?  Who knew she could also sing!  I’m so sorry to have missed her bluesy five-song set at the Little, Brown Speakeasy.  Beauty Queens is her most recent title, but she has another coming out in the fall, so definitely watch for it.

If I were at BEA,  I might have heard best selling novelist and recent bookstore owner, Ann Patchett roast Amazon and their bullying tactics in her award speech.  Now that would have been something!
I would even have been willing to drag myself out of bed for the infamous Children’s Book Breakfast despite it’s obscenely early time slot. I have heard John Green, Lois Lowry, and Kadir Nelson speak on more than one occasion, but I’d hear them all again in a heartbeat, even over a bleary-eyed breakfast. John’s humor and passion are as renowned as his fabulous books, and as famous as he and his brother Hank’s nerd-fighting  videolog.

And to have heard Kadir talk about doing the research for Martin Luther King’s “I have a dream” speech would have been awesome.  It’s one of one of the ‘greatest of all time speeches’ that continues to resonate even after all these years.  The only surprise is that it took so long for someone to come along and illustrate it and making it so much more assessable.  Although I have not had the chance to browse through Kadir Nelson’s tribute to King,  I have heard that it’s stunning.

And then there is Lois Lowry.  She has has written so many books that have touched me.  She has written so many books that help young people grapple with the big questions.  I have heard her speak bravely and eloquently about how fragile memory is.  I have heard her talk of how she used a family photo album to try to help her father remember who she and her sister were when he was in the later stages of Alzheimer’s disease.  She talked about how that experience impacted The Giver, the book which she was working on at the time.

Lowry has always known that young people believe they can fix the world and her characters reflect that.  They don’t give up and neither does she.  She has a way of translating personal pain into stories that speak to young people. Although her son returned from war in a flag-draped coffin, the main character in her new book, Son fights and vanquishes evil.  It’s no surprise to me that Lowry was given a standing ovation.  I just wish I could have been there to cheer her on too.

So, even though I can’t be at BEA, I’m living it vicariously. So, here’s hoping that you enjoy this little bit of BEA that I’ve brought to you today.

Advice for wanna-be writers and hockey players

This week Vancouver Canucks hockey team captain, Henrik Sedin shared the best advice he’d ever been given with graduating students.

“There is no shortcut to anywhere worth going.”

I couldn’t agree more.  Whether you want to play hockey in the NHL or publish books, there are no shortcuts.  You have to put in the hard work. You have to set goals and work hard to achieve them.  You have to develop the skill set that will get you where you want to go. Whether it’s skating and shooting the puck or writing great stories, you have to practice.

Jeanette Winterson on writing for children

I came across this quote by Jeanette Winterson in an article she wrote called “Why I became a children’s author.”  Although written in 2009, it is as true today as it was three years ago.

It’s not just a story we’re offering them, it’s the tools they need to tell their own stories, to tell to themselves, without too much cliché, and with some complexity. Once you understand yourself as a story you are in the process of telling, instead of a fact in a story told by others, you understand that you can change your own story. That is power.

  

37 pitches but only 2 winners!

It’s time to announce the two winners of the picture book pitches for “Random Acts of Kindness for Writers.”

Thirty-seven pitches were submitted so it took me a while to get through them all.  The two I’ve chosen are: Janet’s pitch for an Emily Carr story, and Eleanor’s pitch for a story about banishing bedtime fears.  Congratulations to all of you who pitched.  Keep working on those stories, and keep honing your pitch!  The winners will be receiving an email in the next few days requesting their manuscripts for a free critique.

 

 

Neil Gaiman Shares ‘Secret Freelancer Knowledge’ – GalleyCat

Neil Gaiman Shares ‘Secret Freelancer Knowledge’ – GalleyCat.  Neil Gaiman, one of my favorite authors, passes on great advice for students graduating from University Of The Arts in Philadelphia.

The best advice he ever received came from novelist Stephen King. Here is Gaiman’s secret freelancer knowledge:

You get work however you get work, but keep people keep working in a freelance world (and more and more of today’s world is freelance), because their work is good, because they are easy to get along with and because they deliver the work on time. And you don’t even need all three! Two out of three is fine. People will tolerate how unpleasant you are if your work is good and you deliver it on time. People will forgive the lateness of your work if it is good and they like you. And you don’t have to be as good as everyone else if you’re on time and it’s always a pleasure to hear from you.

YouTube Time Machine is a fabulous research tool

I recently came across a very helpful research tool for writers called YouTube Time Machine.  You can view videos clips from 1860 to present with over 10,000 videos available.  It’s totally awesome and can help you with specifics and to capture the general sensibility of the period you’re writing in. You can find movie trailers, sports or cultural events, commercials, and current events. Thanks to GalleyCat for the heads up on this.

Here’s an example of TV commercial from 1954. There are 63 other videos from this year!

 

 

 

 

Random Acts of Kindness for Writers…Free PB critique

As promised, here is my Random Act of Kindness for writers.

As a published author of more than a dozen picture books, I’m offering a free critique of a picture book manuscript for two writers based on your best pitch.

Fill in the following form ASP and you could be a winner.

***May 31, 2012 is the last day to enter, so don’t delay***

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